【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

/ `, d/ n5 O: ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
6 I* n; d" Q0 E$ Q7 `: q" d深藏在我心底的那句
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From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

# @1 S( Y8 ?' X4 n2 P$ B1 N! |" iWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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% Y  [1 n  a5 O# ~/ S縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( _/ q) `0 ]3 _3 j4 @* n$ vI would probably know how you feel
) a$ |7 O( T' e) S9 ?& ~凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
0 c* P( f7 U9 a2 z# s) g為什麼
# m! a  B: [5 d8 M" b如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

. `6 W$ ]$ U, g9 ?愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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' S& P3 P$ Y, Q8 J0 z! q# ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
! b5 S% V' I. J- r! H+ F6 o0 Q7 o( z你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
) D( n3 o3 v5 F' a# {6 @1 M托付我的愛
( j) @9 X; ]: m2 _* H. _) u收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

! u+ y' }5 K$ ~- m愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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8 T% s, F0 e$ o/ U, Q/ @; M" \+ K& tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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. J6 N# t% l# ?3 q# v愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

- v4 H8 z1 l8 s" Q  cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

8 f- ~  d+ ]- x/ G' I8 G4 @2 z也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

! ~" \) l/ G* z. t希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
$ G- c( ~# }& X我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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) {3 m# T- B  S$ H& I  bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

3 T8 |6 |) i, V) K& M* o8 A可否讓我托付給你?
4 p, A6 L- Y; j( P! X: b4 `  E: K托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
; x, m! G; `# u$ h, ]* E+ SEntrust my love within your heart

. q/ \( h9 b! C" I2 ^  ]可否讓我托付給你?
( ^  d: r' L7 h8 ]* k托付我的愛 收在你心裡




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5 P! D3 @4 c, j7 _4 W对唱曲参赛译稿
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) \! H% X& c; E# H! n$ n4 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" Y" G1 }1 `; U) t8 O1 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" a0 D" U6 D4 S/ }6 N; @( ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

! ~) o6 s; c8 U皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
% e4 ?" b0 J! i* l9 r! _我心充滿快樂
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' r4 _! ~8 F- {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- P) f4 ^7 w2 N- h9 z4 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
' Z1 D- @9 o/ E4 [$ s3 ^3 VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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! B9 K# P. N6 r2 {4 S月光映在我的眼底
/ |+ {7 t6 U6 S6 k月夜陪著我一起沉醉
2 r5 \7 j9 r. O+ k, `月光輕吻著夜幕
* r" i5 z; R' V; j# d7 V- w星空充滿著歡樂
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' A2 e5 p: |; @$ ]* k  wIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

0 \: K  `" C' H4 C" C8 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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7 I- V& A! i$ S" f. u你勿須擔心憂鬱
6 Q8 W5 ]' z6 ?  ]& p: v我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
# \( O  a; i6 l& F% U. S堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
  \* R! _' o1 V1 @! U) J8 U+ O* l: x" gI really want to know just how much you love me

0 H, w1 o! S" E你的一言一語都是愛
) M* ~5 Q3 G% \" u8 O我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
' k7 _/ ?, u5 J  b' o' s1 fNothing can compare to my love
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0 ?- U' j5 p7 e/ G我的愛 全心全意
& M4 S6 X! ~) a* @+ m0 b& v+ H你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

: t  [- A& Z( U% ?# oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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: `- L6 v( `: L- Q  _我歡迎你將它打開
: c% D: h4 E7 w9 ^, b: @" }我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
( Y7 T; ?" z# B0 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
& g$ B+ o/ W) _# ?& b& E你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

  U! x! g/ l9 @  L" Z* UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

  E  |# ?5 C/ E% O- e, o6 y可惜我未能以死證明
8 |& f1 l) U) X$ U9 O) Q/ o" i我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! H* _7 m5 y" z+ x% U如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
7 q/ u3 k# ?/ D* B3 {千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

! N+ ^5 a0 G- z8 [1 s是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒