【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# i/ e2 s( D& b( B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 _, Z; c9 W9 {  U7 |: a; ]9 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 l" F9 b# m, E* b- b! g6 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. ?/ ]3 R% G# Z; |: |: a2 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 h1 Z8 [0 c9 D' a# v0 u& M5 \; K9 ]) dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 V7 V0 V9 R  v: q( |# E0 o1 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' k9 k( K" T- \- xNothing can compare to my love
3 G/ C8 \, K0 o* W8 g4 aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, W+ E# |* `$ y; D3 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 m! R" Z: z* R. ~7 ?) X1 g+ C" ~With such a tongue as yours,
1 E8 b  u9 K1 N0 N" f) f7 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& Z, Y! g8 M" A, a+ R2 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 G0 Z7 z& a2 W& Y2 f! f7 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ h) q* P, m* |* w3 ?7 ?  l4 b2 c) I7 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 |7 ]* Q- m- z( ~+ U- p, q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& ^* D1 J; Z- Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  Y: u4 k1 K! B) _3 y: Z, w# R1 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) o  P. o1 o8 ^0 y' o# O2 v2 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 n- k+ x. n# S) i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 [3 L4 }' q3 p1 Y% a8 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 U/ D0 c' `1 f; R$ f& @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- l& {; e+ x( m8 U, @8 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 A' y; @, L+ d" ^" K4 X( H; b2 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 a$ S7 p1 l0 h& L9 c9 V) p" o: f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( r4 s4 A4 f+ D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* p" Q  a2 H; m/ A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; V; g4 T9 U- d6 j1 O/ n1 @8 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: n, y" K' g5 J  l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 p+ \' m) K7 u2 i* F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 g; E4 }5 ]4 b& [2 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: ]$ J' B4 I. T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 i0 M, o5 {3 m4 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 g. ^+ H3 M; B- O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; C+ I+ y, b( i& s- |0 x  a8 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; L$ K! e4 P  {7 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 Q' v  H& i9 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 p) |# u8 f+ L/ k! [/ d/ ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 A9 g0 x- Y) ~2 @8 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" \7 X/ Q2 d) u% ^9 Q  ?  U4 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ?0 w2 @* R" L; B! W% B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' j" s- A" |4 n4 |6 s4 Q9 c# G$ i+ p0 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% z9 E9 J! {- t% ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* X) t1 ^' B- f( w# _5 b7 k9 {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 J$ I3 F4 c+ c( I2 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>