【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 h) [$ ?+ a' `+ w2 [4 y5 }歌词我附在后面。
1 S3 P  j0 {  N2 w" E8 g) j# TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' K( D2 \& E2 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ B% M" Z& e3 _% p$ T8 q) b( gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 ^, }  U' w, g4 u& M' j8 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( C" [) C+ ?1 i5 \) @" X+ c/ M! VEvery other word you utter is love
; m  j6 t! \* V, W* ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. m1 `0 n  \, y, K+ o+ NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# C# }7 h) Q$ L$ AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* e: X8 z* A: `I’m still filled with fear
$ Q9 N. V0 W3 {8 y/ C/ B( cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ U4 P3 [- W! v2 G' H' NI regret not dying
& I" ?; g9 e. G/ I/ V; o% [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 d0 l7 A  _: g7 y% tWith such a tongue as yours,
4 ~3 S/ e/ b& bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 [+ t" H. R. z% j+ TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% o; q6 {; Y% {2 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; n& ~, |. L2 P$ n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 I! k+ V1 D" j( Z2 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 n3 A( ]* ]3 j& q% Q1 b4 N0 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: R7 b+ J3 h6 V2 D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ^) I- e# n5 v4 s; S# B' B3 S$ h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: P, `; F$ B: h. ]" ?  }2 O<P>你无需担心</P>
5 v/ N) ~( {! i7 l5 a$ L; [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 Z" J+ [7 d" U2 H  p) ?4 k% B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& F( F! w9 V( @( U: J2 f5 m: l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 A- R; ^2 ]3 y) V# v" t" Q* f; R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ v0 H) U0 y) ~  k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 Q6 ^8 ?+ G3 C, V9 R7 f  N5 r4 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* X: j6 ?  Z, A/ b- |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' @% c  f7 m6 h4 t. }: [5 K. S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 |7 `3 M! L; a+ k8 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. }6 ~8 Q9 K$ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 [7 P; w- I+ ~- d5 [2 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* f6 c7 v% [+ g9 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 j  }8 @2 z! W& @# k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! N5 p4 Z5 t. T( G6 k, E5 z; d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! o6 W; v1 |4 H. e3 X/ U' y, e<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 z. j. d- ~  M2 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 b9 S$ ~$ i3 e/ l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 ~( f# L& q2 o* ^: r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ t0 s8 C  u4 G9 g( F% q, q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 N$ s* c; c1 j9 h) T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ f+ s& ^- ~0 ~9 K7 m! C+ {% F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( j" W  _7 S3 G; d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>