【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 A4 ^: k9 _2 F- L0 f8 G; N( g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 W) J9 C6 Y; M- T" W4 b* wI already loved you with all my heart
) l, Z" Z2 y  `/ X$ zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" ~- K# k( l/ A9 Q4 cLove… just the word love
# h' g. Q2 _/ A% |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# i9 G3 I* y1 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 n/ W! Q5 x8 n! f) b1 K  ^1 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ _" ]# N/ _8 D0 mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 W2 J; g2 F0 o4 H/ D# V5 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 [# H3 c/ N% E# q: fCan I entrust it to you?
' A: S- H+ \" h8 }  D; b" y" FEntrust my love within your heart

7 m, h+ l& U9 {6 ^+ a& c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 Q% \* d, Q' p& h/ P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 {: b7 n6 K: l  l9 e9 ^+ T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ m% e& \8 P7 H, u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& S. }* M, f. a( l: }" n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 N1 p, i3 E. ~: W. D% H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 _% u! r% q& e2 X5 R  m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; v' d4 T# P' Y9 Y/ @' o, I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 E  {5 x$ R! m4 \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) l7 @  L, J  e. a: @& ?' m! H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" @- ?5 z* s6 q3 ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. d1 a# j# @/ T; d4 m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ M0 u$ @9 B- q# P) t1 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* n/ t# i  c' ^& M0 M+ U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. x+ m# i8 u+ g# Y8 i/ J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) g: _, ]4 k) E. o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( p' P' j% s0 V& I; x<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 J% p/ m. w# E8 R2 F& K. X4 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 p* ?' ~! R* K9 `( u6 ^& D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 s4 I: N. l6 F, |6 T  O$ l<P>But I never did </P>
# s0 i6 s0 m1 ^) y) I$ }<P>但我不会 </P>
& D9 ~+ K. n$ ]7 g# x6 _+ r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 ]. v+ b( w7 L9 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ D1 E8 w- h' [# t1 {! t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 C6 Y0 u+ ^6 o) ]; F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: h% X1 p7 D( @' K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! O. F$ t5 J) x$ v+ e5 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ P: j8 F# J6 O1 J+ P# K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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" ^8 |" n: g' B# J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 ]" X; `5 I8 ?/ A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 |; \' D( D( E  n% w1 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' k% Y  y8 D; p% ]. H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>