【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 ]9 \. _. U7 G; ?% X5 O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- e# G5 G% P/ f+ V: y: E8 mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. ~6 B4 Y3 }4 ]# V7 t6 T1 G5 KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 t9 z, p& ~" g% `* I# d1 R; ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 W; c9 ~  T) e' a; bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; w! ?9 n0 w* j  z2 f! W$ `& cIf today isn’t too late,
, [/ ]! f8 S: R/ oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ L2 ^& G* C: i) f% I* f( TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% Y0 i8 y0 g+ z* C* CCan I entrust it to you?
% A0 U$ j* K$ X+ G- S7 @  [8 d% VEntrust my love within your heart
! W: U# v! d, t& ]$ MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 c" L9 d* s1 u2 sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& L8 U0 O6 W7 {' ~, IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 I6 D; B$ F5 A  XIf today isn’t too late,
3 R& l. W1 q, u. b. q' cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 Y% ]; o' s8 f% J6 r! a2 e% uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ ?0 d" X$ @4 w2 {0 S' w8 |- v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* a& I! w: c4 L: ~# b# o$ K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 @" A' A) J! |+ Y2 ^3 \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ C3 X8 H+ g3 g* z9 X' }# a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ J$ Y0 L# P, T: A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ S' k1 L% e3 M" a5 @$ s6 ^; V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 s$ A6 w- x* Y# G$ m3 ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 V1 w: [4 ~1 R0 B8 p) ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* R( [$ n' U, I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( X2 ~0 G; T+ `% q- i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# p2 K% G: e4 e$ y3 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ g7 H8 ?; r4 [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 g* j+ a* l& t) p9 J8 G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 S) R% l* Q+ ?, T8 {  N: F  D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 e! g" y7 R8 [$ \, @: [& J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 U5 c0 m+ k7 Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% @. E  I( F5 e/ b0 }9 h$ v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( Z/ t9 D. s% k* N# z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 S! X* f, [" T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! P' W. j: M: l4 Z6 @' `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' S* ?5 c) y7 a9 P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! j+ j+ L% w$ {6 |6 ^1 q% Z& F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 y) P+ l6 t) @  l$ O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% W9 A1 G& B- x; ?5 g. H$ @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! Y6 \2 Y2 _6 r' w( [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# ]& ?3 j% |$ [  Q' J; x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ a7 I! m7 ?$ b: m  u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 _& {1 m$ s6 G1 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) m/ S: J7 M/ `+ e# _! z$ `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 |: ], r3 }6 q  W6 Y6 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* l% i( {! u# U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& r1 O- X7 s% U6 e6 G+ ]* J% n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 g: e) R# B  c1 @2 o% T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ |/ \* f& \! P( v<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>