【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" N* [) y  g! i2 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ C+ K4 S' B9 T/ {' GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 J  x1 P/ f/ L/ W' |) `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 t$ i, b0 o- l+ qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  u9 ^* i, f( E6 ?/ DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  ~7 q" C  A) q1 G! zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ a! E6 n: T2 \Every other word you utter is love
) O) E/ s% D6 EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' ~0 k% a% P0 b) w( q9 @: b2 J* mNothing can compare to my love
2 H6 \5 @6 v$ D- aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- F' |) P9 d6 J" s' T2 q" |0 F1 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! [  B& }2 e3 b! {! r! C4 L3 m4 v8 K" zI regret not dying
3 j4 ]! Q0 _' u6 C0 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: |- R& _$ p% M+ xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! V+ p' ^+ i5 f" u! m# U3 u4 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 e4 l% c9 j+ x1 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 {: v( b& \7 s. k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 g* `- ~( {2 q8 T  ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: f4 b- T+ a9 A1 C$ v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) n7 f7 b/ w, g+ w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 d2 E4 }3 k! j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. E( s4 U% ?$ ~: w/ k3 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; h  I7 |, C3 U  \" ^9 q8 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 |2 Q# k! s9 E4 F5 L! o$ z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Z( l, l, y, l0 ~) O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# B) Y& g" e" }$ X  W0 d/ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% |8 N! M) ]% @+ E3 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% ]+ E6 |; {; y5 w) b1 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! Q% ?4 q4 z5 P% e. y3 c/ I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 D- T% N/ A7 Z, v9 L' U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" \4 W1 d7 S3 O# u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* h; T# O/ n* p+ o$ j/ U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 O0 [: s- e' S7 U* c9 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 N' m( r& i7 G2 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ]$ q0 k; X( `* W/ q9 |6 A3 ^% f, x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ X4 n8 K+ j! L5 e7 U7 A- \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ~2 Y) y5 t! r: |) ?2 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 I2 @8 K+ Y* d1 Q0 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>