【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 |6 a$ s7 q/ w9 @$ C/ u歌词我附在后面。
1 j6 x0 K, |2 N$ g1 v$ A/ XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% i) K( h# l! l+ QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: Z1 K& N3 q/ i. UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, n/ |; ?1 W  h9 }9 U- Z3 a! RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 @! I# P/ {3 P% j0 mSeeing the sky content with its love
+ V3 b3 w) W8 ]8 s) vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* ~% {" R& ^' V# K; oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ D2 B: t; j0 F# W7 ~% n' a' W5 lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ i5 x, u# V4 b/ g2 M5 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 Y8 T4 G: ?6 F3 H6 V$ ~* z! F' rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, F8 D* b& I7 m% d9 m6 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! r# H4 O) Q7 O! e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 V9 R! i" q9 _6 p/ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& ^3 v+ K# b  f) O! H( \( w5 x/ C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 Y2 T, G( o; w& T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 ~! P5 P0 A- l) x! N) G: d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* X3 ]( S/ K7 J. P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  p! n* g, Q6 e% U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Q5 i& x/ J" w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ c8 r9 {+ J) e5 G# x9 j: L7 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 z. u3 R8 d# s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" E* w8 ~9 k( l2 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) l2 M) A8 p6 p9 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' F6 K5 L' K/ S, o! k$ E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 W% ~) v' |* G# G& h+ j  s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 |' S2 Y& b3 ]8 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- e( j1 }' b* ?) n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; m  [- \) D! o6 [5 R" x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 E/ n% S* f) D+ [) W8 p$ |+ ?/ Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 y7 G% H4 \, ^* P+ D% R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' k, H+ }2 C2 G! P! ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ V' }* U4 v. q  b8 C/ |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ u1 p) M0 Z* r3 M9 s3 J! Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' Y7 y8 Z: E9 H, L8 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: _  L$ T( V  l6 C4 }$ w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 O6 `! \  J9 w) x/ ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 Z+ z  ~8 x( P8 P. K; k% B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' N8 F5 Q+ T  @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>