【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ u  I( C# Q+ n- O/ Y, R1 R我另将歌词附在此。
( N# K" J. Z% }$ w# Y* X" r0 aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. Z+ r( I- Y- r0 j% GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 d+ t. Z6 n  e/ HI already loved you with all my heart
/ |) t. |( _- E" v; }# u( yWe meet and talk everyday,
( ^2 I5 F. L& f# z2 V7 ]8 TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# n, G' ~8 p' ~" [Love… just the word love
% T% [& c( m+ eWhy is it so difficult to express?
* P9 A+ Y5 j- }0 ]& w) s4 BI want to confess that I love you,
9 m4 I) {" c: PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# A3 B% n! X2 C. K* A- Q  H$ I+ |! nIf today isn’t too late,
4 ]1 ?1 f) t  j* SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 g  T0 ^- E% `& [8 K  TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 b1 f8 N/ C% l2 J9 c( j/ I" hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( P5 N. r" G. X1 y/ N4 qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; @, p" `. a& m  x& k. S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. M, Q6 h5 N: l% O5 E; E3 y3 c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 G2 f- ^! A! S' f8 a  A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 C" J$ b9 W% N) i; k. ]  n( X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 t( L! X% ?! \! |" C* {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 ?& R2 L9 z& @, v, j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 v0 p) A. {  N0 c) Q  ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& q9 B2 A8 Q" h' I" D  m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& f& }  [  R0 v! [# s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* @( E( x$ f; M# Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) X; t# e: h5 i- N3 I: v( D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' `- T1 g( K6 `  ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ s0 L- e) X* d  g/ s! _1 P& H<P>但我不会</P>
7 F. r- N" R$ o' Y7 T- x2 J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 `! J& w5 b+ E+ d& v; j1 [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 E. L  m, F9 d4 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* V4 ?2 p  s5 u2 i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ y9 N! N5 F$ V( \7 Y# @) z( r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 }& F7 ~+ ]# c% U% j+ ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 X) A' B: C* Q# j4 b: h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% ^( W5 y8 _% g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ W& s3 D  [! g) l# G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ |3 M' l: ~, v3 Q1 Q- T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: s* \+ O. l2 s) w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ {  ]- R  U4 f7 }! z4 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* ]5 d, d1 i3 a7 @7 w- W( d# Z* q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ n+ Z, \1 M  N3 v; d2 U) y  p1 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& X3 v9 G" p5 l5 B  c9 e+ H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 l. C, x3 Q# C/ a+ J7 h  P) |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>